2014年5月27日 星期二

☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Steven 劉棋汶








Treasure Hunt
A long long time ago, there was a girl called Joyce and a boy called Tim. They lived in a village next to a forest and they were poor. They cut trees for a living and their clothes were dirty. One day, Tim woke up very early and he took an ax and wanted to cut some trees. It was dark and quiet in the forest. Tim walked very slowly and he cut trees one by one. Suddenly, he fell on the ground. When he got up, he found a big door on the ground and it was unlocked. Tim opened it and went in. He found a hall way with a lot of doors on both sides. Then, he saw a box on the hall way. He picked it up and brought it home. Tim told Joyce what had happened today and Joyce suggested that they should opened the box.
After they opened it, they saw a glass bottle and a piece of paper in it. They took out the paper. It was a map! They were happy because maybe they could be rich if they could find the treasure. The next day, Tim and Joyce took the map and went to the same forest. They opened the same door and went into it. They followed the direction of the map and went into one of the doors on the hall way. When they got in, they heared something scary. Even though they felt scared, they still wanted to find the treasure. Suddenly, a lot of snaked fell from the ceiling and they were shouting and running. They saw another door and they quickly went in. They were tired, so they sat down on the floor. When they thought they were safe, there was a huge monster coming out and he caught Joyce. Tim was scared, so he picked a rock and threw it to the monster.
The rock hit the monster in the eye and the monster covered his eye. Joyce was released and Tim held her. Suddenly, the monster turned into a key and Tim was excited. Tim picked it up quickly and kept walking. Finally, they found a treasure box and opened it with the key. They found a lot of jewels and gold. They put them in their bags. Suddenly, a glass elevator appeared. Tim and Joyce went in and the elevator closed the door and took off. When they opened their eyes, they were already in their house. After that, they become rich and happy.  

   學校名稱:東勢分校
         學生姓名:Steven (劉棋汶)
         就讀期數:S215
         指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑
         得獎殊榮:F級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項
 


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