2014年5月29日 星期四
2014年5月27日 星期二
☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Steven 劉棋汶
Treasure Hunt
A long long time ago, there was a girl called Joyce
and a boy called Tim. They lived in a village next to a forest and they were
poor. They cut trees for a living and their clothes were dirty. One day, Tim
woke up very early and he took an ax and wanted to cut some trees. It was dark
and quiet in the forest. Tim walked very slowly and he cut trees one by one.
Suddenly, he fell on the ground. When he got up, he found a big door on the
ground and it was unlocked. Tim opened it and went in. He found a hall way with
a lot of doors on both sides. Then, he saw a box on the hall way. He picked it
up and brought it home. Tim told Joyce what had happened today and Joyce
suggested that they should opened the box.
After they opened it, they saw a glass bottle and a
piece of paper in it. They took out the paper. It was a map! They were happy
because maybe they could be rich if they could find the treasure. The next day,
Tim and Joyce took the map and went to the same forest. They opened the same
door and went into it. They followed the direction of the map and went into one
of the doors on the hall way. When they got in, they heared something scary.
Even though they felt scared, they still wanted to find the treasure. Suddenly,
a lot of snaked fell from the ceiling and they were shouting and running. They
saw another door and they quickly went in. They were tired, so they sat down on
the floor. When they thought they were safe, there was a huge monster coming
out and he caught Joyce. Tim was scared, so he picked a rock and threw it to
the monster.
The rock hit the monster in the eye and the monster
covered his eye. Joyce was released and Tim held her. Suddenly, the monster
turned into a key and Tim was excited. Tim picked it up quickly and kept
walking. Finally, they found a treasure box and opened it with the key. They
found a lot of jewels and gold. They put them in their bags. Suddenly, a glass
elevator appeared. Tim and Joyce went in and the elevator closed the door and
took off. When they opened their eyes, they were already in their house. After
that, they become rich and happy.
學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Steven (劉棋汶)
就讀期數:S215
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑
得獎殊榮:F級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項
學生姓名:Steven (劉棋汶)
就讀期數:S215
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑
得獎殊榮:F級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項
☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Zoe 連禹柔
Graduated
Lost Monday, we graduate from our elemantory
school. My friends and I were so nervous and sad. When the graduation ceremony
started, some girls started crying. Because they’re going to study in a
different school. I was so sad to hear this news. When the gradution ceremony
was over. I started feeling nostalgic. I remembered when we were in fifth
grade, our teacher said “Class dismissed.” And we all ran and played a game
called “Ghost hunt men.” During that time. We all thought that we would always
be together and nothing would. Now I wish I could return to past, but I know it’s
impossible to go back. That’s why some people say, “Time is money.” My best
friend Alice
studied in a different junior high school from me, I am really sad about it.
We met 8 years ago and were always in the same
class. Alice
treated me so well. When she had snacks or a new toy, I was always the first
person to taste it or play with it. Alice
likes dancing, but I don’t. Every afternoon we always stayed at school and I played
the piano and she danced. She is really smart, kind, and beautiful. Everyone
like her. She sometimes made jokes when I was sad. She tried to cheer me up,
when I was unhappy. I have another friend called Sarah. She likes singing, but
I’m bad at singing. But she never laughs at me. I met her 4 years ago and
Alice, Sarah and I are good friends now.
We three played together all the time. She
couldn’t play with us in the afternoons because she had an English class. Sarah
is really smart. She studies with me in the same junior high school. One day,
when we were in elementary school, Sarah didn’t have her English class, so we
played together in the afternoon for a really long time. Because Alice and I
have no chance to play together anymore, I wish I could meet new friend like
her in high school. Our classmates and teacher went to a hot pot restaurant and
had dinner together the girls sat together. The food there was so delicious. We
will not have a lot chance together and I miss her a lot.
學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Zoe (連禹柔)
就讀期數:S215
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑
得獎殊榮:F級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項
學生姓名:Zoe (連禹柔)
就讀期數:S215
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑
得獎殊榮:F級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項
☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆桃園三民分校,Joyce 呂杰凌
My Graduation Trip
Last month, my classmates and I went for our graduation trip. The night
before the trip, I was so excited that I could not sleep well, I arrived at the
school early next morning. We got up the coach and began our trip. Along the
way, we sang songs and played games. We were very happy. Few hours later, we
arrived at the National Museum of Natural Science, Taichung. We saw many exhibits including a
Mummy. After lunch, we headed south to south Taiwan. Soon, we arrived at Tainan. We had a historical
tour around the Anping Fort and Chinkan
Tower. In the evening, we
had a campfire at the hotel where we stayed. It was a wonderful night where we
had lots of fun. The next morning, we went to E-Da Theme park.
There were so many facilities that we could play.
First, we played the Super Water Battle. We almost lost our voice
because we screamed so much throughout the ride. We also played the
merry-go-round, Ferris wheel, roller coaster and many more. In the evening, we went
to the Love River,
Kaohsiung. We
cruised along the river on a boat. It was breezy and we really enjoyed the
beautiful scenery. On the third day, we went to National Science and Technology Museum. We watched a 3D movie about
space junk. After lunch, we headed for the chelungpu Fault Preservation
Park, Nantou. There we
saw the destructive effect of the September twenty-first earth quake. Then we
were on our way home. The trip only losted three days and two nights. I took a
lot of photos and bought some souvenirs too. I had a good time. It was a trip
that I would never forget.
學校名稱:桃園三民分校
學生姓名:Joyce (呂杰凌)
就讀期數:217
指導老師:Joseph 王昌羽
得獎殊榮:F級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項
學生姓名:Joyce (呂杰凌)
就讀期數:217
指導老師:Joseph 王昌羽
得獎殊榮:F級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項
☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆鹽行分校,Liang-Yu Huang 黃亮瑜
To: Human
From: Cockroach kingdom
Attention Humans, we, the cockroaches declare war with
all humankind. You have been chasing us away with your bug sprays and plastic
flip-flips. Why do you hate us so much? Is it because we eat waste and garbage?
It is so unfair! Stray dogs and cats eat garbage, too! Why do you have mercy on
them, but not on us? So, humans, you should fear us. For we, the cockroaches
have been trained and taught to fight with you. Do not look down on us. We have
rebuilt our king down and gained super naturals powers. Next time you see us,
and are ready to kill us with your flip-flips, aim correctly. Our teleport-tation
abilities will make you go crazy. As for the bug spray, don’t get too excited.
Oar king has invented special invisible masks. We are
not afraid of the bug spray anymore! Ha! Humans! Get ready! It’s time for us to
do battle with you. We are willing to die for our kingdom. If you see us in the
future, you better ran or we will fly toward you with fire and you will get
burnt. Be careful, we have make poison liquid with our brothers and sisters
that will kill you if you touch it. Your skin will itch and you will go blind
if it touches your eyes. When you walk, do not try to step an us with your
flip-flips. Our kin men knives will not just break your flip-flips, but also
your feet bone too. And humans, you every where on this may hear this big
earth! Hooray before we take for cockroaches over the earth. “Hooray for
cockroaches. We will live forever!”
學校名稱:鹽行分校
學生姓名:Liang-Yu Huang (黃亮瑜)
就讀期數:214
指導老師:Stacy 蘇畇勻
得獎殊榮:F級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項
學生姓名:Liang-Yu Huang (黃亮瑜)
就讀期數:214
指導老師:Stacy 蘇畇勻
得獎殊榮:F級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項
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