2014年5月29日 星期四
2014年5月27日 星期二
☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆大雅分校,Jacky 陳冠丞
My Autobiography
Hello, I am Jacky Chen, I was born to middle class family in 1999. Two
months after I was born, the worst earthquake happened to hit Taiwan. This
natural disaster took the lives of hundreds of people. Luckily, my family
escaped from it. When I was one year old, I could walk without any help. My
first small steps were a giant leap to my parent. At the age of 3, I got my
first birthday present, a cool red bike. In order to ride on it, I practiced
every day. My mom said that I went riding no matter if it was rainy or sunny.
Eventually, I became very good at it.
After I entered elementary school, I met my best friend, Ken. We have
had great time studying and having fun since then. He is the one who listens to
me, cares about me and he is around whenever I need him. Now, I am a junior
high school student. With my parents’ support and care as well as with my
teachers’ and friends’ help, I learn and grow well. I thank those who have
helped me. Though being under a lot of pressure, all I have to do is study hard
in return. I hope I can go to a good school. I hope I will have a good job in
the future. I hope I can give my parents a better life. I trust that hard work
can make my dreams come true.
學校名稱:大雅分校
學生姓名:Jacky (陳冠丞)
就讀期數:217
指導老師:Emily 張家慧
得獎殊榮:F級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項
學生姓名:Jacky (陳冠丞)
就讀期數:217
指導老師:Emily 張家慧
得獎殊榮:F級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項
☆E級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆大雅分校,Bonny 魏子淳
No More Sweets
Avril is a girl who likes to eat sweets. She often has
a toothache because she doesn’t like to brush her teeth after eating sweets. Her
mother always tells her not to eat too many sweets, but she never listens. One
day, after seeing a dentist, Avril got two pills. The dentist told Avril she
had to take one pill a day, so she would feel better. After she took the first
pill, she fell asleep. Then, she came to a forest. In the forest, she saw a
river chocolate, trees made of cotton candy and flowers made of lollipops. She
quickly jumped into the river, had a bite of tree leaves and licked some tasty
flowers. Then, she kept walking in the woods. She found a house made of cake
and pie. She was very happy, so walked in without knocking on the door. “Wow!”
I can eat as much as I want.” Then she started to eat the table, the chair and
the window. When she was about to eat the wall, she heard strange footsteps
approaching. When she turned around, she saw two big eyes staring angrily at
her. They shouted at her, “How dare you! You are eating our house.” Then Avril
quickly ran out of house. They started to chase Avril. She was very scared. While
she was running, she found the other pill in her pocket, so she swallowed it.
After that, she woke up. When she woke up, she told her mom she would never eat
sweets again.
學校名稱:大雅分校
學生姓名:Bonny (魏子淳)
就讀期數:213
指導老師:Sunny 丁豔紅
得獎殊榮:E級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項
學生姓名:Bonny (魏子淳)
就讀期數:213
指導老師:Sunny 丁豔紅
得獎殊榮:E級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項
☆E級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆大雅分校,Dino 陳尚煒
A Picnic Trip
Last spring time, my family and I went on a picnic
trip to Ali Mountain. It was a nice and breezy day.
When we went up to the mountain, we were not surprised to see a big crowd.
People were there for the cherry blossoms and we were, too. We quickly found a
big tree and settled everything on a blanket. Then, we couldn’t wait to enjoy
the lovely scenery. My mom and sister loved taking photos with the cherry
blossoms. They took many pictures and posted them to their facebook pages. At
that time, my brother was wandering around and my father was making sandwiches
and chatting with his friends on Line. I took out my binoculars and tried to
find something to watch. Far be hind a tree near the bushes, there was
something moving. I tried hard to focus and questioned, “What is that?”
Suddenly, a big gorilla jumped out from the bushes. “Help!” I shouted as I
tossed my binoculars in the air. “Dad, Mom, help! There’s a big gorilla.” As I
was about to run away, the gorilla grasped my jacket and said, ”Ha, got you,
silly bro.” That was my mean big brother. He made fun of me because he had
nothing to do. Soon, the sun set and it was time to go home. Thought I was mad
at my brother, I had a good trip, so did my family.
學校名稱:大雅分校
學生姓名:Dino (陳尚煒)
就讀期數:212
指導老師:Chi-Lin 蔡琦琳
得獎殊榮:E級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項
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