2014年5月29日 星期四
2014年5月27日 星期二
☆F級創作小書比賽 特優作品 ☆斗六分校,Jimmy 李俊賢
Lunch Surprise
When I was little, my parents worked out of our town,
so I always lived with my Grandma. She always prepared healthy lunches for me
to take to school. Every time I opened my lunch, it would be a very big
surprise. One day, my Grandma took me home earlier because I was sick. Then, I
saw she only ate rice porridge for lunch. At that time, I didn’t know why she
only ate it for lunch, I only thought she liked to eat rice porridge. One year,
a day near her birthday, we prepared to celebrate her birthday. I suggested to
my parents to take her to eat rice porridge on her birthday, but when my
parents heard this idea they were very angry about that. They told me no
one celebrates a birthday with rice porridge. I answered back, “Grandma always
eats rice porridge, so we can take her to eat her favorite food. What is wrong?”
Dad: Where should we go for her birthday?
Me: Let’s take her for rice porridge! Dad: Why would we do that?! Me: She eats
it everyday, so it must be her favorite food. Then they said that rice porridge
wasn’t her favorite food at all. She only ate rice porridge because she wanted
you to have a healthy meal so she made sure you had everything. At that moment,
I just knew I was very immature. Dad: Grandma eats porridge because she wants
you to have a healthy lunch. Me: Oh! I see.
When I studied in senior high school and stayed at the school dormitory,
I began thinking about Grandma’s lunch. On the first holiday in school, I went
back home and took my Grandma to eat a big meal with everything she likes to
express my thanks to my Grandma.
學校名稱:斗六分校
學生姓名:Jimmy (李俊賢)
就讀期數:216
指導老師:Vita 謝函妘
得獎殊榮:F級創作小書比賽〝特優〞獎項
學生姓名:Jimmy (李俊賢)
就讀期數:216
指導老師:Vita 謝函妘
得獎殊榮:F級創作小書比賽〝特優〞獎項
☆F級創作小書比賽 特優作品 ☆斗六分校,M.Y. San 沈旻儀
The Unlucky Hamster
My
sister is a monster, she killed my pet within 30 minutes of me getting it. She
is a murderer. A long time ago, my friend gave me a pet, it was a purple
hamster and it was very cool and cute. I put it in a box at home and went to the
pet store to buy some food for it, I rode my bicycle. I had enough money to buy
the food for my hamster. After I bought the food for my pet, I went back home.
When I open the door, I saw my sister watching TV. Then I went to feed my
hamster. I put the food into the box, but it didn’t move. It stayed there for
few minutes and still didn’t move. “What happened?” I said nervously, I touch
it and it didn’t move, it felt like a rock. I was surprised, “Wow, wow, wow!” I
can’t believe it! “It’s dead!” I am so sad because it was my first pet.
I
opened the door and asked my sister, she was watching TV “Do you know what
happened to my hamster?” “I…I don’t know, did it die?” My sister said, avoiding
eye contact with me. She looked nervous. “Did you kill it?” I said: ”No! It’s
not me! I just gave it a bath in bathtub!” “And what else did you do?” I asked
to my sister. ”I used the hair dryer to dry it.” “What an idiot you are!! I
hate you idiot!” I took the hamster to the yard, I dug a hole, “Bye, Bye little
thing.” I put the body into the hole and used soil to cover it. I was so sad, I
stayed in the yard for few minutes and than a magical thing happened. Some
plants started to grow minutes on the soil, “What?” It was so beautiful and I
couldn’t believe my eyes! I will never forget this magical moment.
學校名稱:斗六分校
學生姓名:M.Y. San (沈旻儀)就讀期數:216
指導老師:Leanne Goodwin
得獎殊榮:F級創作小書比賽〝特優〞獎項
☆F級創作小書比賽 特優作品 ☆斗六分校,Maggie 林怡蓁
The Next Hero
Once upon a time, there was an island named “Cali.” They have a
tradition that when a boy came of age he would be sent to hunt for something in
the dark forest. One year a boy named Smith turned fifteen. The tribe’s leader
knew how strong Smith was, so he assigned a difficult task. He had to hunt and
kill a black bear. This was a very hard mission because the bears are much
bigger than most of the men. Before he started, he imagined all the things that
may happen in the forest. Although, it was very dangerous, Smith was still very
excited and dreamed of being the best and strongest man. On the first hunting
day, he felt a little scared but mostly excited. At the beginning of the
ceremony, there were a lot of people there to watch him walk into the forest.
He had trained for this ritual, so he had the
knowledge about what to eat to survive in the forest. In the forest, there were
lots of trees and plants that he had never seen before. He also saw many kinds
of animal that watched him carefully. He thought, “I must find the block bear
as fast as I can!” On the fifth hunting day, he finally found a bear footprint.
He took his knife out and made it sharp. He followed the footprint then he
found a cave where the bear lived, he walked in…. Smith was scared but he
needed to be brave to hunt the bear. He walked slowly and quietly…. Suddenly, a
big bear started running very quickly to him. “Ahhh!!” Smith screamed. As the
bear came close to him, he raised his knife and stabbed into the bear’s body.
Luckily, the bear fell down. So, Smith had won. After that, he was surprised
and happy that he caught a bear when he went back to the village with the bear,
everyone cheered for him and he was very proud, he was a hero. Who wants to be
the next hero? The forest is waiting for you!
學校名稱:斗六分校
學生姓名:Maggie (林怡蓁)就讀期數:216
指導老師:Vita 謝函妘
得獎殊榮:F級創作小書比賽〝特優〞獎項
☆E級創作小書比賽 特優作品 ☆斗六分校,Jasmine 吳欣蓉
The
Adventures of A Thousand Dollars
There was a little girl named Lillia. Her mother gave
her one thousand dollars to buy food.She liked to draw happy faces on things, so she drew a smiley face on
the note. She was walking and then all a sudden a gust of wind came. The one
thousand dollars blew out of her hand, onto the ground. Lillia started to chase
after the note but it kept wandering away with the wind when it blew. She lost
the note!There was a series of events that happened next. Firstly, the
thousand-dollar note blew into the circus. It passed through a ring of fire, crossed the path of
an acrobat in mid-air, and then it blew outside.
It began to rain, but the thousand-dollar note seemed
to have a mind of its own. The note was not afraid of the impact of wind and
rain, and continued to fly in the air bravely.After the rain stopped, it gradually fell down and
fell into a river. Then it blew down a hill and moved slowly to the sea by the
wind. One day, Lillia who lost the thousand-dollar note went
to the beach to play. Suddenly, she saw a note floating in the sea. She
picked it up and started smiling. Then she discovered that it was her
thousand-dollar note because she saw the smiley face she had drawn on it. This
time she had a tight grip on the note!
學校名稱:斗六分校
學生姓名:Jasmine (吳欣蓉)
就讀期數:213
指導老師:Tina 梁郁婷
得獎殊榮:E級創作小書比賽〝特優〞獎項
學生姓名:Jasmine (吳欣蓉)
就讀期數:213
指導老師:Tina 梁郁婷
得獎殊榮:E級創作小書比賽〝特優〞獎項
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