The Lost Sword
One day, my father talked about “The Lost sword” with
his friends and I heard that. I felt interested, so I started to ask him about
the sword. Then my father said, “The sword was gone. If I had the sword, I
could beat all the people in the world.
I told my father that I wanted to find it. So I saved
some money and planned for a year. After a year, I went on a ship, I needed to
find that by myself. When I was in the ocean, the ship shake very hard, I felt
very dizzy and almost fell into the ocean.
At first, I saw a small volcanic island. I looked for
the sword there for three days, but I couldn’t find it. So I went on the ship
again and continued searching.
Then, I went to the Arctic.
It was a very big place, so I looked for the sword for five days. But the sword
was not there, too. So I needed to go to the next place.
Next, I went to the desert and I saw a man. I asked
him about the sword and he said, ”The sword is in a cave, and there is a dragon
guarding it,” He gave me an ax made with dragon’s bones and it was hard. I
found the cave and saw a white dragon. I took out my ax and started to fight,
but its skin was too hard. I had to think about its weak place.
Maybe the stomach was not too hard, so I used my ax to
attack its stomach. It worked! The dragon roader and died. Its blood came out
and a sword came out, too.
That sword has a blue rose Patten on it and it was
very fantastic. I reached out my hand and it flew into my hand. Then I wanted
to go home as fast I could.
Finally, I got back home safely. I showed the sword to
my father and he was so excited. He said, “I can’t believe you really did it!”
This sword gave me good luck every time. It was an exciting adventure.
學校名稱:東勢分校
學生姓名:Sean (劉君翔)
就讀期數:S213
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑
得獎殊榮:E級創作小書比賽〝特優〞獎項
學生姓名:Sean (劉君翔)
就讀期數:S213
指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑
得獎殊榮:E級創作小書比賽〝特優〞獎項
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