2014年5月27日 星期二

☆E級創作小書比賽 特優作品 ☆東勢分校,Sean 劉君翔











The Lost Sword
One day, my father talked about “The Lost sword” with his friends and I heard that. I felt interested, so I started to ask him about the sword. Then my father said, “The sword was gone. If I had the sword, I could beat all the people in the world.
I told my father that I wanted to find it. So I saved some money and planned for a year. After a year, I went on a ship, I needed to find that by myself. When I was in the ocean, the ship shake very hard, I felt very dizzy and almost fell into the ocean.
At first, I saw a small volcanic island. I looked for the sword there for three days, but I couldn’t find it. So I went on the ship again and continued searching.
Then, I went to the Arctic. It was a very big place, so I looked for the sword for five days. But the sword was not there, too. So I needed to go to the next place.
Next, I went to the desert and I saw a man. I asked him about the sword and he said, ”The sword is in a cave, and there is a dragon guarding it,” He gave me an ax made with dragon’s bones and it was hard. I found the cave and saw a white dragon. I took out my ax and started to fight, but its skin was too hard. I had to think about its weak place.
Maybe the stomach was not too hard, so I used my ax to attack its stomach. It worked! The dragon roader and died. Its blood came out and a sword came out, too.
That sword has a blue rose Patten on it and it was very fantastic. I reached out my hand and it flew into my hand. Then I wanted to go home as fast I could.
Finally, I got back home safely. I showed the sword to my father and he was so excited. He said, “I can’t believe you really did it!” This sword gave me good luck every time. It was an exciting adventure. 

   學校名稱:東勢分校
         學生姓名:Sean (劉君翔)
         就讀期數:S213
         指導老師:Jay 鄧駿傑
         得獎殊榮:E級創作小書比賽〝特優〞獎項


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