2014年5月27日 星期二

☆E級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆大雅分校,Dino 陳尚煒


















A Picnic Trip
Last spring time, my family and I went on a picnic trip to Ali Mountain. It was a nice and breezy day. When we went up to the mountain, we were not surprised to see a big crowd. People were there for the cherry blossoms and we were, too. We quickly found a big tree and settled everything on a blanket. Then, we couldn’t wait to enjoy the lovely scenery. My mom and sister loved taking photos with the cherry blossoms. They took many pictures and posted them to their facebook pages. At that time, my brother was wandering around and my father was making sandwiches and chatting with his friends on Line. I took out my binoculars and tried to find something to watch. Far be hind a tree near the bushes, there was something moving. I tried hard to focus and questioned, “What is that?” Suddenly, a big gorilla jumped out from the bushes. “Help!” I shouted as I tossed my binoculars in the air. “Dad, Mom, help! There’s a big gorilla.” As I was about to run away, the gorilla grasped my jacket and said, ”Ha, got you, silly bro.” That was my mean big brother. He made fun of me because he had nothing to do. Soon, the sun set and it was time to go home. Thought I was mad at my brother, I had a good trip, so did my family.


  學校名稱:大雅分校
  學生姓名:Dino (陳尚煒)
  就讀期數:212
  指導老師:Chi-Lin 蔡琦琳
  得獎殊榮:E級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項

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